tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post7279510395896398726..comments2023-05-30T04:22:23.234-05:00Comments on La Vida Betsy: Summer Sonnet (2)betsyannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00361149174776820425noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post-27072623706778378692009-07-16T10:48:37.934-05:002009-07-16T10:48:37.934-05:00The first one was good, but I think that the rhyme...The first one was good, but I think that the rhyme makes it so much more fun to read. This poem feels more loved.lobiwanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03069142105420409845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post-25643217596252294062009-07-15T21:30:53.641-05:002009-07-15T21:30:53.641-05:00I like this one better, too! Don't get me wro...I like this one better, too! Don't get me wrong, version 1 was great, but version 2 is better!Amanda Stehlikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10456089162821592510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post-26594929581216533832009-07-15T16:35:53.579-05:002009-07-15T16:35:53.579-05:00oh, and I prefer this version. Rhyme make everyth...oh, and I prefer this version. Rhyme make everything feel more complete.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04070254692070287013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post-87555449848364020562009-07-15T16:34:51.176-05:002009-07-15T16:34:51.176-05:00that's not a word.that's not a word.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04070254692070287013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37669247.post-86941070153238708542009-07-15T13:45:09.895-05:002009-07-15T13:45:09.895-05:00meraviglioso!meraviglioso!Steven317https://www.blogger.com/profile/16441330827061627361noreply@blogger.com